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Exercise 447

1. Write an advertisement for a debate that is to be held at your school. Imagine that the advertisement is to appear school paper. Let it be more than a mere announce

in your

ment.

2. In the same way advertise a football, baseball, or basketball game, or an inter-class contest. Appeal to human interest.

Exercise 448

You have permission to secure advertisements to be printed in the program of the entertainment spoken of above. Suppose that you are to write the copy for the different advertisements. Use one-eighth, one-quarter, one-half, or one page, as you wish.

1. Advertise a grocery.
2. A meat market.
3. A dry goods store.

4. A candy store.
5. A bakery.

6. A bank.

7. A tailor's shop.

8. A photographer's studio. 9. A barber shop.

10. A drug store.

Exercise 449

Imagine that you are connected with the advertising department of your school paper and that a dealer to whom you have sold space wishes you to write the copy. Use the same article that you chose for Exercise 399, draw a rectangle to represent the space to be filled, and write the copy.

Exercise 450

Write a circular to advertise the same article that you chose for Exercise 399 (4). The circular is designed to be wrapped with purchases.

Exercise 451

Prepare a poster that is to announce the next issue of your school paper. Let it be a display rather than a publicity advertisement. Make an appeal to strong human motives.

Exercise 452

For distribution to the several eighth-grade classes in your district prepare a booklet of four or five hundred words on "After Grammar School What?" in which you show why it is better for a pupil to go to high school than to go directly to work. That is, your aim is to persuade pupils to come to high school. Before you can persuade, you must convince; before you can convince, you must inform; and unless you awaken interest, you cannot expect to attain any other aim.

Remember that a general statement, such as "Every one ought to go to high school" carries no conviction. Such a statement, however, may be developed (see Chapter XIII) by the use of

I. Iteration.

2. Particularizing details.
3. Concrete illustrations.

4. Quotation from authority.

Don't forget that eighth-grade children are human and will respond to strong action-compelling motives. Play up those that you think will make the most direct appeal. Remember also that every one enjoys a story and, if possible, work one in by way of illustration but be careful to observe the warning that Phillips Brooks gives (see the beginning of Chapter XIII).

INDEX

Numbers Refer to Pages

A, pronunciation of, 7.
Abbreviations, 26 ff.; objectionable in
the formal parts of the business
letter, 439.

Accent, 16.

Accept, except, III.

Account, letters for opening an,
351-353.

Action, secured through appeals to

feeling, 249 ff., 451.

Accuracy, project to secure, 369 ff.
Active voice, of verbs, 93, 97 ff.
Adjective, phrases, 58; clauses, 60.
Adjectives, peculiar endings of, 33-34;
used as adverbs, 56-57, 82 ff.; pred-
icate, 83; incorrectly used, 89 ff.;
comparison of, 86-88; absolute, 87.
Adverbial, phrases, 58-59; clauses,
60.

Adverbs, misplaced, 85, 332; and

prepositions, 57.

Advertisements, aims of discourse

found in, 447; showing full sales
appeal, 449; motives appealed to in,
451; catch phrases used in, 452;
suggestive names in, 452; good and
bad headlines for, 454-456; effec-
tive use of white space in, 455; pic-
ture-making details effective in, 172,
173, 455, 458; question opening for,
449; command opening for, 450;
story opening for, 182; developed
through particularizing details,
205; developed through compar-
ison and contrast, 215; through
argument, 245; novelty headline
for, 453; principle of balance in,

457; appeals to imagination in, 170,
458; tests of effectiveness in, 460;
reference to experience, principle
used in, 462; projects in writing,
463-465.

Advertising, imagination in, 170, 458;

topics for talks on, 225; books on,
238; display, in school activities,
447 ff.; outline for debate on, 266 ff.
Affect, effect, III.

Aims of discourse, 139; to interest,
138-183; to inform, 184-240; to
convince and to persuade, 241-270;
all four aims, 388-465.
Analogy, argument from, 246.
Analysis, of words, 29 ff., 32; of sen-
tences, 61.

Answering complaints, letters to be
used in, 356.

Antecedent, uncertain, 326.
Apostrophe, 75-76, 273.
Appeals, to emotion, effective in

speaking, 164-167, 249-254; to nat-
ural interests, in speaking, 186; in
sales letters, 413 ff.; to imagination,
through picture-making details,
169 ff., 177–179; in advertising, 172,
173, 205; to motives used in adver-
tising, 451.

Application, for work, 254; for a
position, 254; for a loan, 255;
letters of, 358 ff.

Appositive, punctuation of, 288.
Argumentation, 241 ff.

As and than, 131.

Authority, quoting from, in argument,
246.

Baby blunder, 50.

Balance, principle of, in advertising,
457.

Bibliography, on industry and inven-
tion, 237; on occupations, 238; on
advertising, 239.

Book reviews, 233, 410.

Books that suggest topics for talks,
237-239.

C and g, pronunciation of, 24.
Capitals, use of, 63, 274.

Careless mistakes, 107.

Case, nominative, 70; objective, 72;
possessive, 73 ff.

Catch phrases, in advertising, 452.
Cause and effect, in argument, 248.
Cautions, in letter writing, 340-343.
Center, well-defined, in advertise-
ments, 458.

Character, emphasized in stories, 175.
Circular and follow-up letters, 441.
Class newspaper, suggestions for a
project, 232, 411.
Clauses, 59.

Clearness, secured through repetition,
199; through particularizing de-
tails, 202; through illustration, 204,
242-243; through comparison and
contrast, 212 ff.; in sentences, 317 ff.
Club, project in Research, 216-217,

221-225, 230-232, 235-240.
Collection letters, 353.

Collective nouns, number of, 96.
Colon, use of, 312–313.

Combination of short sentences, for

clearness, 321.

Comma, in series, 276 ff.; in com-
pound sentences, 279 ff.; in initial
elements, 282 ff.; to show omission
of words, 286; to set off appositives,
288; to set off parenthetical expres-
sions, 289 ff.; to set off independent
elements, 291 ff.; to set off non-re-
strictive clauses, 295 ff.; to set off
terminal modifiers, 298 ff.; with
direct quotations, 301 ff.

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